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If your paper feels messy or all over the place, there’s a good chance your thesis statement isn’t doing its job. That happened to me last semester — I thought I had a decent argument, but my prof said the essay “lacked focus.” Turned out my thesis was way too broad and didn’t really match the body paragraphs. I got frustrated trying to fix it until I randomly found this guide: https://www.ozessay.com.au/blog/cust...sis-statement/. It actually broke down how to write a thesis that acts like a map, not just a sentence at the end of the intro. What helped most was the part about making your thesis specific and debatable — not just stating a fact or a vague opinion. I went back, rewrote mine to clearly show what I was arguing and why it mattered, and the next draft came together way faster. Honestly, once you get the thesis right, the rest almost writes itself. So yeah, if your paper’s getting lost in itself, it’s probably time to revisit your core argument.